18.3.09

violence and pussy (a haynaku)

that
night on
the 405 freeway

you
partially drunk
ready to fuck

fleeing
home from
that shitty bar

my
cock swelling
already in anticipation

unexpectedly
our plans
derailed by fate

a
blue minivan
rear ending us

all
sexual tension
ruined by chance

it
had to
release some way

i
grabbed one
of your heels

walked
calmly towards
family of three

smiled
warmly as
window rolled down

before
apology given
i swung hard

brought
shoe down
against stiff skull

he
trapped by
seat-belt and fear

bashing
as furious
muscle would allow

you
watching assault
in rear-view mirror

blood
spraying beautiful
like peacock tail

palmed
his skull
thrusting violently forward

nose
broken against
steering wheel column

wife
screamed annoyingly
during the melee

strided
over to
the passenger side

grabbed
the stupid
bitch by hair

pulling
her out
through open window

frail
body dumping
on cold asphalt

kicked
her solid
in soft ribs

entered
the car
to face child

displayed
father's head
scalp flapping forward

"this
is what
happens when you

throw
rocks at
the fucking pitbull"

i
whispered
to reticent child

leaving
the family
under indifferent moon

you
seemed terrified
eyes twinkling wide

the
night lost
i thought "fuck

it"
and slipped
a bloody finger

between
black skirt
parting trembling thighs

it
being the
wettest pussy felt

we
drove home
listening to talk-radio

my
chi spent
on the 405

9 comments:

An Unreliable Witness said...

I'm going to have fucking brutal and fucking horrible nightmares about this.

That's a compliment, by the way. About the best I can offer, in fact.

Anonymous said...

Love this. LOVE

xTx said...

i hate the 405

jereme said...

auw,

compliment accepted.

anonymous,

thank you.

xtx,

i hate la. this bullshit romance bukowski and fante started over this place i don't get.

gena said...

fuck this is hot

xTx said...

i'm from the bay area, so feeling superior to LA is in my blood.

let's crush them all j....

Ani Smith said...

I knew JD would bring it.

Kris said...

This is fucking marvelous.

jereme said...

gena,

i know i wrote it, lol

xtx,

i am a orange county native (sadly i keep a secret these days)

you get em from the north and i'll crush them from the south.

ani,

yes, tits out and fingers in the air (if i were a chick)

kris,

thank you. i like how you spell your name. it makes you exotic like anal sex with pregnant women